Just watched it. Well done!
On the whole it's pretty good. Feels a little rushed, but that's to be expected of a short film based on a feature.
Here are a few things I thought of while watching:
- I liked the name references but thought that the kid with the apple was a bit too on the nose.
- The spoken intro I think was unnecessary, and could have been explained in the story, leaving the wonderful Sam Raimi style tracking shot unbroken.
- The video side was mostly really good, though there were some freaking issues in the tracking shots. I'm also felt that there were too many tracking shots, and they could have been broken up with inserts.
- The audio side was also really good, in general,
though there were some scenes with very noticeable ADR where the lip syncing didn't quite match up.
These are nitpicks more than anything, but I thought it was worth mentioning as feedback. It's very impressive, especially for a fan film, and I hope that more people get to see it, now that it's back up on YouTube!