Well I rather enjoy knowing Im talking to the real author, rather than someone faking it. So I don't mind the Jeff thing.
Back to the novel, one aspect I did feel that was off the wall, was the alien virus that made him inhuman. But you're one line was so spectacular, that it made me reconsider it. "He felt, as he walked, like a God might: endlessly dissipating and regenerating." Now that was something that just made me have to put the novel down, and ponder the line. I really hope you write more in the Alien and Predator universe.