I'm just saying that you have never looked for any positives in both scripts.
When you started reading the first script and you saw tom's name there did you say "Oh, this is super cheesy, wont even give this one a chance."
And for the second one, do we really know what insurgents are thinking and saying to each other when they see American troops? No, we don't.
If all you're gonna do is bash my scripts and not even point out positives, like the fact my first script had more preds, more fights and more blood (like soo many people here on the forums and my friends at school, some don't even like aliens and predators and they felt my first script of AVP was great, have stated), please don't review my scripts.
Now, I know that sooner or later i would recieve critics, but you SM have not once looked for the goodness in my scripts.
And for the record, the character of Mac is not a homage to Predator on purpose, so stop thinking that if i have characters who have names similar to those in the alien and predator films, that it is cheesy, I am referencing those films, which i love and watch as many times as i can.
Yes to you the character of Nick Ripley, an ancestor of Ellen Ripley, is very stupid and also the idea of having a member of ripley's family fighting aliens and predators on earth present day is a stupid thing to have. But from all of my friends and several people here on the forums, they like the idea of seeing an ancestor of Ripley fighting aliens and preds here on earth.
So, you may not even want to read AvP2, cause it has a lot more, how do you SM say "cheesy names," for its characters. (someone in the script is named Hicks)
Yes, I appreciate your attempt to help me improve, I really do. But i make my characters the way i think that they would be. Yes, i will change the firefight scene dialogue, but the way the characters interact with each other, that will never change unless i don't like it.
Summary of all this, if you dislike my writing, please don't read it. Or at least point out positives and don't be too harsh when you criticize my writing, like you have done for the majority of your posts on this thread. I ain't the best writer in the world, i only started doing script writing last june, so i ain't perfect.