Hello Randy,
You are treating this as canon, I'll see what u eventually come up with and decide after that. At the moment your game looks alright, but I don't see anything new there. I hope you can give the actual gameplay some proper oomph and not descend to the same achiement based grinding and unlocking. Don't imitate, LEAD! Make a good game and THEN I'll buy your collector's edition. You are clearly a pushy salesman but can you make a game Cameron would be proud of?