Part 1 of 5 of an AvP script I did a while back

[Draven]

Yo-yo,

Figured I'd see what some of you guys think of this.
It's intended as a six-part TV series, and as a result, this chapter is largely character/plot based and not so much Alien/Predator. Still, plenty of you bitch about the AvP film having 'poor' characters so here's my attempt at making decent ones.

Hope you likey:

[SiL]

More, please.

[darkbladepred]

Wow... nice. Very nice work there. How soon can we expect the rest?

[Draven]

Since you asked so nicely...

First 9 pages of chapter 2.

[Gates]

C'mon man...is there no more? LoL

How are you gonna leave me hanging like this...LoL

[Corporal Hicks]

I demand PDFs!

[Gates]

Where the hell is the rest of this!?!?!?!?!? 

[darkbladepred]

Come on... just one more page! one more scene... one more line of dialogue... Come on man, I need to read the rest!

[Plokoon111]

This is great!

[Aeus]

  Awesome! Where is the rest? I must have it!

[Draven]

Wow, I had totally forgotten about this thread due to the lack of interest 
Wish I'd stuck around, now 

I'll get to work on more of the second chapter, I took a break from it while working on other, smaller scripts which I'll be filming soon.

I apologize for letting it drop, I'll do my best to make it up to you all 

[Draven]

Since you guys started giving great feedback all of a sudden, you kick-started my interest in the script again and I've gone back to it. Here's the next 10 pages, the creature-action is finally about the get underway. Hope it's worth the wait 

http://www.avpgalaxy.net/fanfiction.php?section=literature007

[Edit: Removed your script and added it to the Fan Fiction section on the main website. ~Darkness]

[Plokoon111]

Very very great!

[darkbladepred]

Awesome as always. Can't wait to see what sort of creature action you have in store for us.

[Warrior Angel]

holy fuggin shit!!!! this is freakin awesome send this in to fox and see what they have to say!!