Hi, I watched the first episode. I'm liking what you're doing so far, as much as it's possible to like AvPR and The Predator.
One thing I noticed right away though, is that having the shot of the two Preds hauling the hugger vats, while it's also shown that the ship is wobbling and bashing into things, feels off. Maybe consider a different shot to establish that the ship is carrying Aliens, coz the shots of it careening around and the shot of these guys carefully carrying a tub of liquid isn't really ideal.