So basically I've redrafted the opening, and the subsequent chapters, and written all the way up the fifth chapter which should be up over the weekend, but here's the re drafted Prologue, longer and less about Cole is revealed than before. I'd love to know what you guys think. I use fan fiction as a writing exercise before I focus on my other work to get the gears going. But still if anybody gives it a read and let's me know what they think I would be most grateful
The attachment is at the bottom
