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#1
Last post by Mornstar - Today at 02:18:03 AM
The entire back of this xeno's head has been blown up, apparently by the explosive bullet that shot into it. But the xeno is still alive, it's regenerating it's wounds, it's immortal.
The entire back of this xeno's head has been blown up, apparently by the explosive bullet that shot into it. But the xeno is still alive, it's regenerating it's wounds, it's immortal.
#3
Last post by ace3g - Today at 01:46:06 AM
#5
"This is why you need to do yoga..."
Covenant
#7
Last post by SiL - Today at 01:03:36 AM
Man I wish I'd seen this last month.
The biggest issue is there's just too much of the dialogue. The lines should be kept short; say as much with as little as possible.
"As some of you have worked out, we're not home yet. We're only halfway there. Mother has intercepted a transmission."
"What kind of transmission?"
"Unknown."
That's it.
Build some anticipation, then drop Ripley's "mother's translated part of the transmission. It looks like a warning."
Ramp up intensity, build to crescendo, drop a slow build scare at the end.