AVPVP: Red demon's revenge

Started by Active-CrazyNut, Jan 21, 2008, 07:16:52 PM

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P.A.R.T 1
Red demon, a strong red faced predator with hard blood has killed over 1000 aliens each time in contacted with them. He is very smart. How does he do it? Quickly and smartly, one of the best predators ever to hunt. He will hunt forever and ever and ever. He is...the Red demon, a strong powerful hunter. Now, he will have a great battle he never fought before!

The aliens are captured by the government and are being studied and tested at a big scientist facility. Guarded by lots of military soldiers and officers, just in case the aliens escape. The scientists are very careful as there have been many accidents including a few deaths from the aliens. They are very careful now and they are guarded. The so called 'evil' government wants the aliens for nuclear wars but first they need to be tested, studied and of course trained to kill all his enemies but something could go wrong. Guards are killed there sometimes by the aliens. Now, an alien king has escaped the lab and let the alien queen escape. A few soldiers check the nest to see lots of eggs and the queen lying dead. They shoot the egg sacks then the king comes down with an angry face and rips apart one of the soldiers. The others shoot the king but the king gets another one and head bites him then eats his whole body. The soldiers try to escape only to be chewed up by the alien king. The king tries to wake up the queen. Seeing her dead the king gets even angrier and then gets out of the nest and tries to escape the science lab but the marines shoot down the angry alien king. They go near the creature but it wakes up and attacks them along with destroying there tanks and a helicopter. Everything is blown up so the king roars in victory. The monster runs threw the barbered gate, destroying it. The alien king runs free into the woods. The other marines try an animal hunt for the alien king only to find gruesome deaths of other marines and a few scientists. The marines head back.

A marine wants to try another animal hunt for the creature before it gets to the cities and starts killing the citizens. When the marines get there they find out a few eggs were hatched and now facehuggers are running all over the science lab or did they escape? They look around only to see facehuggers running free into the woods looking for hosts. The marine, named Barry stated "I will not let those crab creeps kill anyone or use them as a host! Marines, we are going hunting!" Now, they were looking for the facehuggers but they must also look for the giant creature from hell, the king alien going on a killer rampage! As they went on the hunt for the aliens, they saw a man skinned and hung on a tree. Barry, the marine said quietly "The xenomorphs did not do that. It must have been something smarter"

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P.A.R.T 2
The alien king does not go to the town but inside a huge electric object. It looks very dark, alone and creepy. The marines can't find any more xenos. Instead they find dead xenomorphs and more skinned bodies including a dead woman on a tree with a skuriken but what did that? They had to get back. No sign of the alien king or the other xenos, facehuggers and maybe a few chestbusters. They had to head back. But what they will find back at the science facility will be very shocking.

Meanwhile, a few facehuggers go on a swamp. They see a few crocodiles. As the crocodiles enjoy there water, the facehuggers quickly facehuge the poor crocodiles. Then a facehugger queen facehuges a wolf so now there will be a queen runner of terror! After that, the marines get inside the science facility but then they are attacked by a swam of grown up aliens. "KILL THEM!" shouts Barry. The aliens capture a few scientists and cocoon them. Barry shoots an alien only making it angry. The alien gets its tail and tries to stab Barry but instead Barry is saved by a scientist, Phillip who stabs the alien with a long pipe. The acid quickly melts the pipe. "What the?" says Barry. Soon, runners, more aliens and 2 queens join the fight. The soldiers have no choice, they need to get out of the aliens way. As Barry and Phillip run to shelter they witness the alien queen paralyse a few scientists for the facehuggers and runners eat and rip apart a few marines. Then they find a great place for shelter, the lab where they lock the metal door and hide there. A few marines guard the door in case the aliens try to break in. "How did those motherf*ckers get inside the facility? Didn't the others warn us about the aliens coming in?" says a marine. Phillip replies "Looks like they tried to but it was too late, the creatures killed them and the others. God, there are so many of them!" After Phillip says that, they try to break in. A runner breaks open the metal door letting loose the other aliens. The marines run up to the aliens and try to shoot them down but there is too many and there guns are running out. The others escape threw a window. They look back seeing blood splattering on the windows meaning the marines died as there flesh, brain, blood and guts splat everywhere. "Poor marines" Barry says. They run into a small cabin to call for help but there is no response, no signal, no nothing. "There is no help? We can't take these creatures alone! We'll die for trying! I have a family for hells sake" says a marine named Martin. Moments later, a helicopter flies down to try and save the others. The marines think they are safe but then a queen breaks past the wall and jumps on the helicopter. The queen grabs one of the pilots and threw him on a wall with great force. Then the queen bites the helicopter so it falls down to the ground. Barry gets a rocket launcher and shoots the monster down, dead. Now, there is no help.

The survivors walk into the mountains and wear masks that go around there necks in case of any facehugger attack. "Great! We are lost in here and I bet those creatures are after us right now! Why didn't we stay in the other room! We would have been safe there because the metal door is stronger than the other door the aliens where in!" says a crazy scientist. A marine replies "It would not make a difference! They would have broke it anyway, you dumbass!" As the marines walk forward, a predator watches them and leaves. As the predator leaves an alien sneaks up on the predator and stabs him. The alien roars in victory!

Active-CrazyNut

If anyone wants to know, predator part will be in part 5. Just two more chapters then we will see the red hunter blah blah blah. Also, the new xenos are - Crocadile drones, a crocadile unfully grown queen, runner queen and toxic aliens with tentacles. Lastly, P.A.R.T 3 will be about the aliens taking over the city and the surviving marines and scientists discovering the giant object with the king alien. Well, a also want to say P.A.R.T 4 about trained aliens fighting the bad aliens [AVA]

brad873

brad873

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P.A.R.T 3
The bad news has just come. The aliens are now invading the city of Sercin, a new town. The aliens are going in groups to hunt down humans. They get into the town and fight fast even killing the police and the full combine military. No one can stop them. First, they invade a school and kill everyone, even the teachers and students couldn't call for help. Then they attacked a police station and a supermarket. Now, they are running the streets like it was there own. Humans try to evacuate but the aliens are stopping them all. Even the school is a new nest for a few queens. The runner queen makes a huge hole in the road and uses it for a nest, with lots of runners [including her children] guarding her. Also, the government has a plan to kill the aliens without destroying the whole town. No one can stop the aliens; they are breeding fast with over 10 queens in the city.

Meanwhile, the marines and scientists continue trying to find help. "We are dead! We will not survive! We are dead! We are dead!! We are dead!!! We will die!!!" says the mental marine. Afterwards, he continues saying the same lines but is punched in the face by Martin. "Shut up or you will die! Now come on!" The mental man finishes saying "We will not be safe! Don't you understand?" Martin gets mad and shoots him in the hand. "The next bullet will be up your arse! Now keep moving, you son of a bitch!" shouts the angry Martin. As they walk, they see the giant metal object in the ground and try to use it for shelter. What they don't know is the king is inside with a few other aliens including strong alien queen/king guarders. They cross a muddy swamp and finally get into the object. Before they get in they see ancient words that look Aztec and secret. "Well, lets get shelter! Its cold out here!" says Barry. They go inside the dark red object and look around. They don't really find anything but old bones and skulls on rocky shelves. Soon, the mental marine shouts out "We will die! We need to get out! We will not be safe! Save me, lord!" Martin says "That's it!" a moment later, an alien stabs the mental marine in the gut but he is alive. "NO, HELP ME!" shouts the mental guy. The others run up to him to try to pull him back from the alien. "SHOOT IT!" screams Phillip. Barry shoots the creature but the xenomorph pulls the mental marine out and runs off with him. The others can hear him being eaten by runners and a few noises from the king. The marines all come together and lock themselves in a big huge room. "Not again. Now, they are going to break in and kill us. There is no way out and we are short on supplies. Only a few foods and not a lot of water. We are going to starve if we don't go out. Let's just stay here for abit and wait if the aliens try to open the stone door or not. I bet they are ready for us outside and tricking all of us so they can kill everyone!" says Phillip. After hours, there are loud noises. "They are here! They are coming to kill us. Soldiers! Lets get ready." Says the trained marine. The aliens try to break past but the rock is too hard for them to break past. Then, it's silent but does it mean its over? Then the king breaks down the door loudly letting the aliens come in. "Kill the motherf*ckers!" shouts Barry. Guns blaze, blood and guts fly everywhere, people are torn apart by aliens, the marines struggle and there is too many. The marines do not stop though. They keep firing and now the acid blood splats at the walls and at the ceilings, the marines are winning. Then a wounded marine throws its acid at the trained marines face. "It burns! My eyes! My brain!" Now, it was just the king they needed to kill. "Throw the grenade!" says Martin. Barry gets the grenade and throws it at the king's mouth killing and ending the king. They try to find the way out again and they find more Aztec like writings on the wall. "Hmm. I wonder what it says" says Phillip. They find the exit and head out.

The survivors get out of the object and find out they are nearly in the town of Sercin. But when they look over, there is fire, loud screams and the aliens. Barry says quietly "What happened?" Meanwhile, the government has a plan to kill the aliens and it will not do anything with nuking or anything dangerous. "What are we doing to save this town, sir?" says the government's agent. The government replies "A great idea! Do you know those space animals, the xenomorphs?" The agent replies "Yes, sir." Government replies "My fellow scientist trained a lot of aliens and mutated them calling them the toxic aliens. They will kill the flesh eating xenomorphs" Now, the trained xenomorphs are good but will the plan succeed?

Active-CrazyNut

Cool, thanx.  :)

Active-CrazyNut

P.A.R.T 4
The government sends all his toxic aliens out to kill the aliens wrecking the city. Also he sends a young king alien named "Byter" to join the fight to kill the other aliens. "Sir, I'm very worried about this and I have a fearful feeling that the aliens might turn on us or something will go wrong" says the agent. The government replies "Nonsense! The 'toxic' aliens including Byter will completely get rid of any of those killer aliens. Come on! They were trained for months by my fellow scientist friend, Dr Cliff and they did not attack me at all. Also, a month ago we tested to see if our toxic aliens and Byter could kill the bad aliens. So nothing will go wrong, thank you!" The government goes on a helicopter to see if it's going to plan. He sees the toxic aliens running down the hill to the city and killing all the evil aliens including the young king, Byter who is killing a group of the evil aliens. "I tolled you! These evil aliens will die from our toxic aliens so we have succeeded in our plan. We can fly off now. Pilot?" says the government. "Pilot?" The president was in shock. The pilot had blood on his face. He was headbitten. The government moves his head over and sees 3 winged aliens. "NO!" the president screams. Then the helicopter crashes in the woods. What happened to the president?

Meanwhile, the survivors see the aliens fighting each other not knowing about the toxic aliens. "Wait! Why are they fighting each over? That is weird. Wait! Almost all of them are fighting each other! What is going on?!" shouts Martin. "Its toxic aliens. I forgot to talk about those aliens but don't panic because they are our alien friends, the toxic aliens. Also, if you look over in the police station you can see my young king pet, Byter!" replies Phillip. They walk for hours not finding any help but more skinned bodies upside down on the tree. Then toxic aliens come over the survivors and the toxic aliens surround them. "We are surrounded by these creeps!" shouted Barry. Then the toxic aliens go to the survivors and what they did was weird to the marines and scientists. "Why are they guarding us? Oh, they are the toxic aliens. Guys don't worry!" says Phillip. The toxic aliens lead the marines to a broken road to the city. Now, the city Sercin is not infested by the evil killer aliens. "Hey, everyone, meet a special young king alien who is my pet, Byter!" Byter leads them to a big cave in the woods with all the families and other citizens hiding. Soon, there is a loud noise and when they look it's a predator's ship but they think its shelter. Then the real ship comes and gets Barry, Phillip and Martin to be elite combines but why?

Active-CrazyNut

Chapter [or part] 5 is nearly up. You will finally see the story of why there will be PVP [Predator vs predator] and more stories of the Red demon.


Active-CrazyNut

P.A.R.T 5
Meanwhile, on a predator's planet Red demon is fighting a swarm of over thousands of aliens that somehow got on a predators mother ship and where breeding. Acid blood and the green gooey blood splats on the ground, walls and each others faces as they fight. The red demon stabs as many as he could kill with his blades and plasma cannons. The red demon comes face to face with a king and fights him but it was not easy. Then lastly, Red demon shoots the king off a cliff. The predators finish the battle against the aliens. They return back to there den and they train for more battles for more of the alien invasions. There is a predator, Tiger Hunter who will not do orders and he does whatever he likes including killing. Anyway, Red hunter was born in the woods but learned fighting and hunting anyways and was grown to be a strong hunter. He has hunted millions but this time he is going to fight one of his kinds. Red demon is now in a metal predator world full of the predators and a few creatures to hunt. Now, he is going to fight a strong creature in the prehistoric world also mutated by an Aztec potion that is secret – A completely mutated T-rex with long arms and a long jaw. He fights the beast but struggles as the dinosaur is very strong. He jumps on top of the dinosaur and shoots the creatures head and stabs the skull to the brain. The T-rex is still alive but Red demon shoots up the T-rex nose so the dinosaur falls down dead and Red demon roars in victory but now he is going to fight a different stronger dinosaur – T-rex hybrid, the T-alien. Red demon runs to the T-alien and jumps on the belly and stabs but falls off. Red demon shoots the monster in the eye with his plasma cannons. The T-alien was half blind but was still fighting. Red demon jumped on her head and shoots the top and stabs it but faster. He falls off again but he goes on the belly again and cuts it open but the T-alien keeps moving and knocks him over but Red demon grabs her hand and cuts it off. Red demon was not winning and he got bitten by the T-alien. Red demon though would not give up so he ran to its belly and cuts it more then all the T-alien's guts drop out but it kept moving and never stopped. Red demon finally kills the creature by shooting its other eye and the nose. It falls dead. Red demon won.

Tiger Hunter is a great strong predator but he is evil and now he has crossed the line. He was insulted by the royal predator that was right for insulting him because of his badness. Then he shot the royal predator in the head and then taken away the head throwing it in fire. Tiger Hunter leaves into a spaceship heading for a human infested planet, Aron and on city Sercin to kill more. Tiger hunter flies to Sercin but can't find anyone. Then sneakily the crocodile aliens including the runner queen alien runs into Tiger Hunter's spaceship. Tiger went into his ship and flew off. Also, Red demon and the other predators witnessed Tiger doing that so now Red demon and a couple of predators have got to do a big mission – Terminate Tiger once and for all before he causes more trouble. Now, Red demon flies away with his predator buddies behind his back to find out where Tiger is and what is he planning to do. Red demon flies but he can't find him. Moments later Tiger shows up and flies to another human infested planet, Xento the red larva world. Red demon looses control and crashes in the burning woods. Red demon gets out and meets his enemies...

Red demon and his Predator friends are surrounded by runners, lots of them. Then Red jumps on a tree and shoots the runners. They jump on the tree trying to attack Red. A runner sneaks up to Red and stabs him in the belly but Red cuts the runners face off and takes the tail out of his belly. Red is not really hurt as he is very strong. The other predators kill the other runners and they continue trying to find Tiger for what he has done. Suddenly, everything's quiet but they can hear small noises. They look behind and see more runners running after them. A predator, Baron throws a shruiken at the runners that cut a few of them up. More runners show up including a queen alien with a few drones on her back. Red demon gets his weapons ready and fires! Blood splats all over the trees and the acid melts the trees away as the predators fight more of the aliens and runners. Red demon jumps on the queen's back and stabs away. Red shoots open the skull and pulls the brain out and throwing it to a river. The predators continue fighting the aliens and they win but this time they meet the crocodile aliens that are harder than all the other aliens. There are about 10 of the crocodile aliens. The predators fight but it is very difficult. Minutes later, 20 more crocodile aliens come out of no where and fight. But Red gets his plasma cannons and fires the aliens away hard execution style with his wrist blades in case they come near him. The crocodile aliens die but 2 predators died too. They go to find Tiger but it will not be easy...

Predalienking

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