Team-up Story/Comments

[Major Alan Schaefer]

I'm currently working on my part and i'm writing for the Marines (Prey) and the Predator

[Colton White]

Damn

[Major Alan Schaefer]

We might get other peoples oppion but i think me and him are going to do most of the writing, as of now...we'll see but we're open for suggestions

[Warrior Angel]

allright, what Im might do, would that i'll be incontrol of the fightr scenes and introducing a new character in the end of P3 which would be the predalien if that's okay

[Warrior Angel]

I've started to make notes about fight scenes....and hopefully they'll be up soon

[Major Alan Schaefer]

If u want you can just send them to me and War Wager...

[Warrior Angel]

yeah, i did we was talkin' about a fight between a predator and a shark-alien

[severen76]

shark alien, how did the face hugger get on the shark without getting eaten?

[War Wager]

yeah, i did we was talkin' about a fight between a predator and a shark-alien

You can PM me or Scheafer details of the fights and we'll see how we can incorporaite them. I've done the first chapter of the story entitled "Beneath The Surface". 

shark alien, how did the face hugger get on the shark without getting eaten?

You'll see... 

[Colton White]

DUNA DUNA DUNA DUNA DUNA DUAN DUNA DUNA DUNA ,DUNANANANA NANA.....


Srry, JAWS moment

[Major Alan Schaefer]

a what alien....

[War Wager]

The complex is full of marine animals including sharks. We'll discuss the impregnation part when I get round to it.

[Major Alan Schaefer]

WE BETTER lol

I liked the new addition minus the diologue something about it seemed wrong, part of it is how brutal Bishop II is, he seems like he's constantly angery and unlike the calm trusting Bishop II we see at the end of Alien 3. he seemed so trustworthy but had a sinster background that's what made that charater. and other parts of the diolouge was weird as well

[Warrior Angel]

alright to somebody who asked about howa facehugger get on a shasrk with out eatedn, we don;t know yet, maybre scientistrs were experoimenting, you just have to find out and see

but yes it is a shark alien

[War Wager]

WE BETTER lol

I liked the new addition minus the diologue something about it seemed wrong, part of it is how brutal Bishop II is, he seems like he's constantly angery and unlike the calm trusting Bishop II we see at the end of Alien 3. he seemed so trustworthy but had a sinster background that's what made that charater. and other parts of the diolouge was weird as well

Thats how I wanted him to be. You see that he's clearly and angry and impatient man, but when he speaks with Ripley in Alien3, he's completely acting.