just read, enjoy, or don't enjoy, its just a throw away draft, and most of all have fun and please tell me your thoughts. it's the thoughts of the fans that matter! good or bad.
basic premise: dutch is a prisoner, of a faceless company (wayland style) he was frozen after the events in 1987, and is being held captive as an unwilling volunteer of the army contracted space mission and expedition of the newly found planet "origin3" , the mission is to "make the air breathable" and see if the planet is habitable.
dutch is forced to work on the planet, the expedition finds a grave site of 20 decomposed and buried predator skeletons, entombed.
they disrupt an ancient predator temple, perhaps one of the oldest oldest!
the predator (the death dealer) is of "royal blood", very old and very wise, from a lost and forgotten tribe of predator, maybe even the first. this predator has been marooned on this planet and is trying to get off. but there's a lot more to this predators story. .....ohhhh spooky
dutch tries to also escape the hot, orange, desert planet, is reluctant but forced to travel with John a semi-psycho army prisoner and his companion a young girl who can only communicate in an unknown language
Aliglyitha.
P R E D A T O R origin of the death dealer by
Kyle little (river scene)
EXT. ORIGIN3 - CLIFF EDGE - WATER FALL - DAY
INT. JEEP
DUTCH, JOHN and ALIGLYITHA continue the getaway in the army jeep. Racing deep now through protruding mangrove vines, the predator gains across the back of the jeep.
Dutch has finally loaded his m79 grenade launcher, he fires, the predator fly's out of the back of the jeep hitting the desert road. Dutch watches, attends to the steering wheel. A large mangrove bust's open the front side of the jeep they go over the edge of the cliff.
EXT. DESERT ROAD
The predator immediately collects itself, grasping the now exploded chest armor, ripping it off, throwing it to the ground. Predator returns racing after the jeep lunging himself fearlessly straight over the edge.
EXT. CLIFF EDGE - WATERFALL LAGOON
Jeep is free falling, predator falling after it. Jeep collides head first into the lagoon below. The predator lunges in after them.
INT. WATER LAGOON - JEEP
Submerged in water they try to escape the truck. dutch cuts himself out of the seat-belt. John is breaking his way out to help aliglyitha. Arnold cuts her out, then he cuts out john. Predator is clawing its way through the back cab of the jeep. They swim out the now broken in windscreen.
INT. WATER LAGOON
Dutch, Leeds john and aliglyitha out, he is behind.
PRED VISION
As they escape the descending wreckage, body temperatures are lowering.
INT. WATER LAGOON
Predator,under water rears back out the truck and attempts to fire his plasma cannon through the tunnel of wreckage.
INT. WATER LAGOON - JEEP
The two are swimming out the windscreen, dutch, who is behind, gets caught in the slow black cloud of plasma burning the wreckage.
INT. WATER LAGOON
The two turn to see whats going on behind them, they see black cloud, dutch swims out of it, light burns on his back, they continue to swim away.
2.
EXT. WATERFALL - LAGOON - DAY
The commotion continues on the surface of the water, a large sledge of cliff, disturbed by the crash, falls into the lagoon.
INT. WATER LAGOON - LAND
John, aliglyitha, dutch, look back. Sledge, wrecked jeep fall into the deep dark pit of the lagoon. Dutch waves them to keep going, they do. Current picks them up, takes them to thick mangrove vines that emerge from the river banks.
Underwater john and aliglyitha make it to the vines, they go to propel themselves to the edge of land, dutch catches up, he holds them back under and locks them into the vines, signals them to wait.
Moment of silence as dutch watches into the blue abyss. Aliglyitha is already struggling to hold her breath, john is saving her by holding her in the water by doing so hes essentially drowning her.
They feel a big wave hit them under water, followed by a cloud of mud dissipating in the water. Dutch swims a few feet further in attempting to see. Dutch clears the mud with his hand, his eyes widen as he realizes hes staring straight in the masked face of the predator. Dutch rears back into the clutches of the under water mangroves.
Dutch holds the others to keep them at bay.
The predator is trying its best to see underwater, for any disturbances.
PRED VISION
Little prehistoric fish swim by lightly lit up in orange. Predator switches through some visual modes. 1: enhanced heat vision, the fish just light up a little more. 2: inverted heat vision, the fish become blue the water red. 3: noise view, with enhanced audio and wave vision, the predator just get a mess off noise.
INT. WATER LAGOON - LAND
Predator slowly rises, standing in the water until up to his waist. Predator gently pulls two small smart disc's from his back pack, skims them softly across the surface of the water. Predator repeats until 6 are deployed.
The discs travel really fast, blades spinning, they descend through the surface and into the depths. Predator waits patiently.
INT. LAGOON
Meanwhile the girl is passing out from lack of oxygen. Dutch and john have to wait as they watch the discs race past them
3.
the small discs cutting through everything, stone, wood etc.. One is heading straight for them, a fish swims in the way the disc stops immediately as it spikes the fish.
PRED VISION
The smart disc sends beacon and a visual map to predators bio helmet,informing it of the kill.
INT. LAGOON
The rest of the disc's race back. Returning to the predator.
EXT. LAGOON
The predator gently collects them. It walks over and scoops out the beaconing disc, predator holds it up to his masked faces watching the fish die, in a swoop he flings the fish off and the disc back in his backpack.
The predator turns to leave, disappointed.
INT. LAGOON
John realizes aliglyitha is passed out, he becomes agitated, he grabs dutch and yells at him under water to inform him.
EXT. LAGOON
Predator hears this, its head jerks around.
INT. LAGOON
Dutch has to hold john by the throat to stop the movement.
EXT. LAGOON
The predator slowly approaches. Predator slowly crouches with its face looking right into the surface of the water, he gently lowers and skims his open lizard hands through the water.
INT. LAGOON
Right in front of dutch and john, they watch as the predator uses gill like sensors, located on the bottom surface of its hands, like fingerprints that open and close with the sway of the water to try and detect them, fish slide and swim through its hands its feels them.
EXT. LAGOON
The predator finally gives up after one last try and continues on through the mangrove forest that lingers on into the land.
