Hi guys, I just had a short story published, I wasn't sure where to put it on the forum, so forgive me if this is in the wrong place. But given that we have a collection of people with impeccable taste I would love to hear some feedback. The story itself has just been picked up to be made into a short film, for which I am currently working on the script. So if y'all would be so kind as to give it a read and let me know what you think I'd be as grateful as Randy Pitchford in a successful law suit. Enjoy
"It's Not You, It's Me"
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/John85/1430527/
