AvP Gaming Fiction (where you are the main character in a fight for survival)

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All right, I might have made a mistake, let me look into that.

EDIT: All right, I fixed it (I've added a revised version below the original in the first post).  My apologies on the matter, sometimes Windows Word can be a bit glitchy when it comes to gaming fictions like this.

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So sorry for the long wait, guys, college means a lot of work.  But, I finally managed to get another chapter written.  I honestly think I've managed to improve the story in the long wait.  Remember, tell me anything you like and anything you dislike so I can give you the story you want.  I'll attach the next chapter in the first post as well.

EDIT: Turns out I can't attach another chapter to the first post, I guess 4 attachments is the limit.