*AvP:3 (Mesozoic Era)[Very Gritty/BLOODY Take on AvP/ Raptor - Alien Fight]*

[Nychus]

Constructive critique I understand, whining about moot points, not so much(not saying you do, though you can't expect "realism" with acid blood organisms). But I get what you mean.

[SM]

wrote a well described fight between two fictional beasts,

So it wasn't believable

Nice contradiction.

[Nychus]

I don't care, I simply liked the detail of description. How that needs to be a big deal to you guys is your own issue. That's my feedback in the nutshell.

[Huol]

How did the raptor manage to gulp down Alien blood without any wounds?

[SM]

Because.

[Uncanny Antman]

Maybe the story should have claimed that the Aliens did not have acidic blood that far back in their evolution?

At least then the raptor might have stood a chance. 

[Alien Warrior]

OMG, I love this f**king story. It sounds like it would make an excellent movie.

[SM]

Why?

[Alien Warrior]

Because it's awesome!!!!!!

[Uncanny Antman]

Awesome.

Awesome to the max!

[Master Chief]

Awesome.

Awesome to the max!

It totally reeks of Awesomeness!!

(sorry, had to jump on the Awesome band wagon)

[SublimeDBC]

fabrication

[Plokoon111]

No way.

[Uncanny Antman]

An internerd claiming a link to someone related to the subject the forum is dedicated to? 

Gotta be true, fer sure.

[Caledonia]

Very well done, can't wait to read the full thing