AVP: Invasion

Started by Alien Hunter Scar, Jan 01, 2008, 06:58:03 PM

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Alien Hunter Scar

Alien Hunter Scar

Struck me hope you like it  ;D

The sun was high on the barren world. The old Predator had been exiled for killing his fellow hunter. He sat there under what little shade he could find eat what little food he had taken from his dwelling...

The Elders wanted blood for what happened especially the one of the eldest clan members...

His mind was racing and pondering on ways to kill the old one, for the young blood that was killed was his only son. He had asked many a time to the Elders to let him take a ship and kill the exile. Many the time, the Elders have denied his requests, leaving this Predator Vanguard denied his request to shed blood over his dead son.

Exiled from his clan, his wife, his children, this Predator wanted to end his life prematurely tonight. Unknown by him, the planet he was banished to, had an Alien hive thriving under its rocky crust.

A single egg lay in a dark, lonely cave, the rest of the hive was killed by recent Young Blood rituals. But this was not a regular egg. This egg was made by the past Queen, because her entire hive was destroyed, and the Predators closing in on her. Mortally wounded after the Predators had attacked her, she layed a single egg before the Young Bloods finished their ritual.

Sabre, the father of the dead son, put on his ritual mask, with Alien rake marks and acid blotches on it. He would disobey the direct orders of the clan Elders, and take the ship tonight. Donning his armour with past fight markings, his mind raced.

The scientist at the helm watched carefully as the pilot flew through space. The new batch of Marines waited almost patienly in the cargo bay. The scientist wondered how a new thing of technology could fly through space, the uncharted sea of the galaxy. He sighed, picked up a recorder, and stated clearly. "April, 04, 2050, new planet discovered. Capable of sustaining life, similar weather flucuations to Earth. Large bodies of water, life signs detected, perhaps wildlife, or even an intelligent sentient being. We're landing on it, detatching Atmospheric Generators, and sending down Marine Corps to secure area of any hostiles, and make way for the Colony Ship." He looked through the glass towards the new found planet that may be a new home for his family.

The exile took his mask and his neck guard off. Drawing his ritualistic knife he was about to slit his throat when the facehugger with a Queen egg in its tube latched onto his face.

That night Sabre took off right after the exile to take the blood that needed to be payed.

The exile lay dead when the ship landed.

Sabre stepped out of his ship not knowing that a Queen chestburster scuttled up into his ships cargo hold where it went into a cocoon. Sabre walked up to the exile that was on his chest. Sabre wondered why he did'nt move. As he kicked him over he saw the hole in his chest with a puddle of light glowing green blood. He knew what it was...

an Alien.

As Col. Sam walked through the forest he saw some creatures that looked like cows, hippos, tigers, and dogs. One of the tigers attacked him so he had no choice but to open fire as the tiger died the whole forest went silent...

Sabre ran back to his ship after knowing that the Alien was not around but he did'nt know that the new Queen lay dormaint in his cargo bay, as Sabre punched in the cooridnates to his clans world.

The Elders looked at Sabre dissapointed at him so as punisment they told the guards to hold him down so the lead Elder could cut two of his mandibles off.

As Sabre howled in horrible pain some of the Predators brought back the cocoon to the Elders. The Elder carelessly told the Predators to put it into storage.

Hours passed, and a cracking sound alerted the guard at the storage door that something on the other side is moving around. He opened the door, stepped in, and raised his spear. Nothing, except a husk of a cocoon. He started to walk out, but he was slammed down by a Alien and killed quickly.

Col. Sam fixed his wounds and ventured on, still pondering what made the forest quiet. He stopped, heard some water splash, and some leaves shake. He turned around, seeing human blood. Then a low hissing, like a snake. He looked up and saw a Warrior Alien. He screamed to his squad to open fire, while he raised his rifle and put a burst into its head. The Alien screeched, and fell out of the foliage, the dead Marine on its tail. Acid splashed onto Sam's body armour, sizzling fastly. Sam screamed, and threw the melting armour off.

The Alien Queen screeched in the holding cells loudly. It was sitting on an Egg Sack, laying Eggs one by one. Each of them hatched, impregnating the imprisoned exiles that other Predators caught. They were not enough. They spread out, attacking guards and Young Bloods. Soon, they controlled the storage bay and 1/5 of the planet. The Predators were in a dire state of emergency.

Now everything was perfect to one of the Elders humans were sighted on the planet and Aliens were here also, the Elders plans were going all to his divious plan to make the clans go into cival war...



Hope everyone likes it if not okay!!!!   ;D

Colton White

Colton White

#1
I see that your new and all but I like what you have written.The set ups though are not needed.Like maybe have the marines encountered suddenly and surpisingly.

Alien Hunter Scar

Alien Hunter Scar

#2
I'm thinking about finishing a few more...

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