Alien Digital Graphic

[Rookiie]

For the astronauts I remade some of the original concept illustrations from Ron Cobb's "Semiotic Standard"


https://www.avpgalaxy.net/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;attach=13314;type=preview


Any feedback would be really helpful 


Rookiie

[Ale Motion Comic]

The typography, the color, the spaces, composition and design in general looks good to me but the icons not always match the messages next to them. For instance what a planet have to do with penalties when breaking the law? I think the planet design should be next to the first message
(congratulations colonist!).

[Rookiie]

Noted, thanks!

[Citixeno]

The simple graphics give me a bit of that Fallout feel. I could envision a little graphic of a power loader with a note next to it about how using the machine to fight large female space parasites can invalidate the warranty.