Ohhhh can't wait to read! Is this draft the one before the final draft or like an much earlier one?
Edit: Oh it kind of is, I somehow missed that part in the description.
A few pages in and I kind of wish we had more character development and interactions like in this draft for the final film. Enjoyed the interaction between the characters in the first few pages, tho I can see why they kind of cut some of the parts here because it kind of made Naru look a bit sour in the beginning. Other than that, I enjoyed the flow of dialogue. While I know the film centers around Naru, kind of wish it also didn't neglect interaction with the people too.