Predator III Story

Started by Ocho, Mar 04, 2007, 03:49:36 AM

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Ocho

Ocho

Hello all,

I am new to the forums but a long time fan of both series. Recently I've been writing small stories to keep myself occupied and now I'd like to start a Predator 3 short story. I have recently begun brain storming ideas and I have one that I'd like to share and get an opinion on.

This story would take place in 1487, dealing with the Aztec Empire and two Predators. One of the Predators is an elder, leader of his clan. He has been challenged for his title from one of the younger, more headstrong Predators. They are dispatched onto Earth and compete against each other hunting the unlucky victims they encounter.

That's just a small sample, if anyone would be interested I'd be glad to begin the story and share. Complaints and ideas are welcomed.  :)

Gangster Predator

Gangster Predator

#1
This seems solid I think it would definately have potential! So post ur story so I can read! ;D

Ocho

Ocho

#2
To make it easy for anyone interested I went ahead and made a Geocities page ... http://www.geocities.com/robo8@sbcglobal.net/P3Story.html

I've got some part of the story up and will continue to add onto when I have the chance and if anyone is intrigued with the idea. Thanks.

Gangster Predator

Gangster Predator

#3
 ;D your dtory has lot of descriptive words thats good! Its just right!

Ocho

Ocho

#4
Been busy but I have continued on my story ... http://www.geocities.com/robo8@sbcglobal.net/P3Story3.html

Guan

Guan

#5
dont want to be negative, but if a predator leader would be challenged by another pred they would figth eatch other and not some random aliens/humans or other creatuers...  :-\

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