AvP: Species War

[War Wager]

I'm waiting on Xeno-Wolf's list of to-do's so we'll see how the rewrite goes...

[Major Alan Schaefer]

Honestly errors or not, it's a good read...good concepts with a little work can be great

[Xeno-Wolf]

Unfortunately, I work long hours every week - but i'll get some of my comments up over the weekend.

What i'll probably do is specifically crit one section of the story...and see how that goes...

[Zero]

If you could rate it You know I'd rate 5/5 all the way 

[Major Alan Schaefer]

If you go, then We'll loose one of the best then who will the others look up to? 

[War Wager]

Lol, you make it sound like I'm leaving the site!  I might write again but I doubt it.

Unfortunately, I work long hours every week - but i'll get some of my comments up over the weekend.

What i'll probably do is specifically crit one section of the story...and see how that goes...

Fair enough, I look forward to it! 

If you could rate it You know I'd rate 5/5 all the way 

I'm glad you like it. 

[Major Alan Schaefer]

You always come back....trust me...i know

[Zero]

The reason I've not been reading the work of art was because I had my own seed planted in my creative mind.If you read the preview  of it,you'll see that it's probably a story that is one of a kind.


"AVP:THE BEGINING OF CREATION"



Please continue your own seed

[Carnal Calligraphy]

I loved this fanfic. I'm not fond of SJ's outside of the original Alien normally, but being as though this isn't exactly canon it worked for me. Write a sequel or something.

[War Wager]

Thank you.

Any favourite parts in particular?

[Carnal Calligraphy]

The PredAlien and SpaceJockey armies fighting was intense. I like how you gave the Aliens a rank, and an ability to strategize. I also enjoy your AVP R rewrites. I'm still a little old fashioned though, I guess, in that I like the aliens to get a few kills in as well. I think that's why i liked this so much.