Fury of the Soldiers: Ghost Corps

[Prince77]

How would this crossover action horror science fiction movie be?

The title of this crossover movie is "Fury of the Soldiers: Ghost Corps" and this movie is set in the universe of the 1979 science fiction horror movie Alien.

Fury of the Soldiers: Ghost Corps takes place after the events of this other movie: https://www.avpgalaxy.net/forum/index.php?topic=66652.0


Fury of the Soldiers: Ghost Corps is about the military organization task force Ghost Corps and its war against the Diabolomorphs and the Umbrella Corporation. The Ghost Corps are very good when it comes to Black Ops operations.

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The Diabolomorphs are basically the name given to the xenomorphs that became far more powerful than normal xenomorphs due to evolving in some ways for an extremely long time. Then, the Diabolomorphs became more powerful due to some mutation.

Compared to normal xenomorphs, the Diabolomorphs travel freely in space and infest various galaxies, planets, and civilizations. Average Diabolomorph adults are a bit bigger than average normal xenomorphs while some types of Diabolomorphs such as the Diabolomorph Baron are gigantic and much bigger than the Diabolomorph Queen.

These are some kinds of Diabolomorphs:

1. Flying Diabolomorphs(These are winged Diabolomorphs that fly.)

2. Spider Facehuggers(These are Facehuggers that use webs as homes and as ways to trap their victims. These facehuggers impregnate victims.)

3. Electrical Diabolomorphs(These Diabolomorphs use electricity as a weapon.)

4. Mega Facehuggers(These facehuggers are gigantic and impregnate victims.)

5. Mind Control Chest Bursters(These Chest Bursters control the minds of their hosts.)

6. Diabolomorph King(This is the second highest ranking Diabolomorph in the Diabolomorph hive. Diabolomorph Kings are subordinate towards the Diabolomorph Queen. Normally, one Diabolomorph hive has one Diabolomorph Queen and 6 Diabolomorph Kings. Another purpose of the Diabolomorph King is to impregnate the Diabolomorph Queen with the best offspring.)

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Then an organization called the Umbrella Corporation got a hold of the Diabolomorphs.

The Umbrella Corporation is a rival corporation to the Weyland Yutani Corporation. The two corporations got into violent conflicts and wars with each other over possessing xenomorphs and anything related to xenomorphs. Due to this, military mercenaries working for the Weyland Yutani Corporation often got into conflicts with the USS(Umbrella Security Service). Competitions between the Umbrella Corporation and the Weyland Yutani Corporation started out as economic and like that of corporate business but soon devolved into military violence and assassinations. Overtime, the Umbrella Corporation destroyed the Weyland Yutani Corporation.

Due to the various experiments of the Umbrella Corporation with the Diabolomorphs, the Umbrella corporation unintentionally turned the whole human population of the human planet Enoch 67 into zombies. One type of these zombies produce Diabolomorph chest bursters within them that will eventually burst out of their chest which kills these zombies. The zombies took over Enoch 67 which resulted in the Diabolomorphs escaping from the Umbrella Corporation and ruling all of Enoch 67.

A long time ago, the Umbrella Corporation also revived the dinosaurs of Earth and brought those dinosaurs into Enoch 67 but after Enoch 67 was conquered by the Diabolomorphs, the dinosaurs were impregnated by giant facehuggers which resulted in the birth of the Savagomorphs. The Savagomorphs are Diabolomorphs born out of various types of dinosaurs such as the Tyrannosaurus Rex.

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Below are the protagonists of Fury of the Soldiers: Ghost Corps:

1. James Braddock(from the 1984 action movie Missing in Action)

He is one of the greatest military soldiers that ever lived. He was a US military soldier. He is also a one man army.

2. Project Alice

She is a humanoid experiment created by the Umbrella Corporation. Due to this, she is above that of normal adult male humans when it comes to speed, strength, agility, physical strikes, and durability. She was given military training by the Ghost Corps after becoming one of their members.

3. Drake

Drake is originally a robot terminator that was programmed by Skynet to exterminate humans. Due to this, Drake is far above that of normal human adult males when it comes to speed, strength, agility, physical strikes, and durability. But after Skynet was destroyed by two legendary one man army commandos, a German engineer and scientist by the name of Diederich Abendroth programmed Drake to not hurt humans and to protect humans. Diederich also modified Drake in ways that enhanced Drake. Drake looks like a 13 year old European German white boy and due to this, some American college fraternity bully members tried to bully Drake but Drake just brutally killed them all. This event horrified Diederich so Diederich programmed Drake to be more gentle. Then, the Ghost Corps adopted Drake as one of their members. Drake is one of the best soldiers of Ghost Corps.

4. Dar Dar Binks

Dar Dar is not human. This is because he is a Gungan from a Gungan planet. He is a son of Jar Jar Binks. Dar Dar Binks is one of Ghost Corps's greatest soldiers. Like his father Jar Jar, Dar Dar is clumsy in some things.

5. Frank Castle

Frank Castle is one of Ghost Corps's greatest soldiers but before he became a member of Ghost Corps, he was a violent brutal ruthless savage vigilante that often brutally kills and brutally tortures gangsters. He has a huge hatred for gangsters and used to hunt down gangsters as a hobby in the USA. But before becoming that vigilante, Frank Castle was one of the US military's greatest special forces soldiers. Like James Braddock, Frank is a one man army himself. Many people think of Frank Castle as a sociopath and are scared of Frank himself. James Braddock doesn't fear Frank Castle and only has respect for Frank Castle while Frank also respects James Braddock.

6. Alex James Murphy

Alex James Murphy is a cyborg soldier of Ghost Corps. Before Alex was a member of Ghost Corps, he was a cyborg cop who hunted down criminals and gangsters in Detroit, Michigan.

7. William Adama

William Adama is the commander of the Ghost Corps. But before this, he had nothing to do with Ghost Corps or any of its current members. Before becoming a member of Ghost Corps, William Adama was once the commander of the space carrier battleship called Battlestar Galactica. Many members of Ghost Corps respect William as their commander due to his great skill as a tactician and strategist. He is also the most mature member of Ghost Corps. He is a proficient combatant himself but he thinks that James Braddock is the greatest combatant of Ghost Corps.

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The story of Fury of the Soldiers: Ghost Corps is about the Umbrella Corporation planning to take over Enoch 67 but after the Diabolomorphs and the human-turned zombies took over Enoch 67, the Umbrella Corporation tried to take over Earth instead so the US government sent the Ghost Corps on a mission to take down the Umbrella Corporation.

Then, the Ghost Corps and the US government realized that the Umbrella Corporation isn't the only problem but also the Diabolomorphs that escaped from the corporation, took over Enoch 67, and are threatening to expand in the universe. So the Ghost Corps decided to also fight the escaped Diabolomorphs.
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These are the locations that the Ghost Corps members will be fighting in:

Area 1 - London, United Kingdom(The Umbrella Corporation planned to take over Earth so the corporation sent its robots to invade and destroy the city of London. The robots destroyed the city so the Ghost Corps was deployed by the US government to save the city from the robots. The Ghost Corps will arrive at this city at night by riding a vehicle. Before the Ghost Corps soldiers get out of the vehicle, the driver of the vehicle, James Braddock, will use this vehicle to crash into multiple robots sent by the Umbrella Corporation. This action of James Braddock killed those robots. Then, the Ghost Corps soldiers will get out of the vehicle and begin fighting the Umbrella Corporation robots that destroyed the city.)

Area 2 - Underground Roads

Area 3 - Destroyed US Marine Corps military base(This base was severely annihilated by a powerful Diabolomorph called the Destroyer. The Destroyer is the boss of this area.)

Area 4 - Underground American City

Area 5 - Huge USS Military Boat Ship

Area 6 - Swamp

Area 7 - Savagomorph Jungle(The boss of this area is the Savagomorph Triceratops.)

Area 8 - An extremely gigantic USS Military Train

Area 9 - Snow Forest

Area 10 - Snow Mountains

Area 11 - Egyptian Pyramid

Area 12 - USS Military Fortress

Area 13 - Umbrella Corporation Robot Factory(This factory has many military robots guarding it.)

Area 14 - Umbrella Corporation Laboratory

Area 15 - A human city in Enoch 67(This city is taken over by Diabolomorphs and human-turned zombies.)

Final Area - Space Diabolomorph Hive(This Diabolomorph hive is in space. This hive is the area where the Ghost Corps will fight the Diabolomorph Queen and her 6 Diabolomorph Kings.)
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First, the Ghost Corps fought and destroyed the Umbrella Corporation, the USS soldiers, the zombies, and the Savagomorphs.

Later, the Ghost Corps destroyed the Diabolomorphs.

The final part of Fury of the Soldiers: Ghost Corps is the Ghost Corps soldiers raiding the Space Diabolomorph Hive and fighting and killing all of the Diabolomorphs there. In the Diabolomorph hive, the Ghost Corps soldiers' final battle is them fighting and killing their final enemy which is the Diabolomorph Queen. The Diabolomorph Queen is the final boss.

After the Ghost Corps killed the Diabolomorph Queen and accomplished their mission, a spaceship arrives and picks them up. The Ghost Corps soldiers were then sent back to Earth by the spaceship.

Then a CIA agent used a nuke as a type of attack towards a part of Enoch 67 which killed the Diabolomorphs in that part of Enoch 67. Then the CIA agent used this form of attack against the Space Diabolomorph Hive and all parts of Enoch 67 which killed all of the Diabolomorphs in those places.

The ending credits of Fury of the Soldiers: Ghost Corps will include outer space as a background.

[Acid_Reign161]

Honestly? In the interest of finding something positive to say; you've managed to do the impossible and make AvP:R look like a masterpiece in comparison, congratulations! 😃

[GetThat81]

https://youtu.be/vWo7miKSpDg?si=euWpb8mU2drQwW4y

[Prince77]

https://youtu.be/vWo7miKSpDg?si=euWpb8mU2drQwW4y

What do you mean?

Honestly? In the interest of finding something positive to say; you've managed to do the impossible and make AvP:R look like a masterpiece in comparison, congratulations! 😃

Why do you hate this idea of mine for a crossover movie?

[[cancerblack]]

Can I ask how old you are please, Prince77?

If you don't want to be specific, just the first number is okay, so 1X for 19, 2X for 25, etc.

[Prince77]

https://youtu.be/vWo7miKSpDg?si=euWpb8mU2drQwW4y

How does that video relate to my post?

[[cancerblack]]

Answer my question please, Prince77.

I can't critique your idea properly until I know if it's the work of a child or an adult.

[Prince77]

Answer my question please, Prince77.

I can't critique your idea properly until I know if it's the work of a child or an adult.

Wouldn't it be better if you just judge my post without knowing my age? Knowing who I am as a person could affect the way you think of my post in a way the makes you judge my post as something else compared to what it actually is.

Judging my post without knowing who I am is actually better because in that way, you're actually judging my post by judging my post and not you judging my post based on me.

[[cancerblack]]

I'll be real with you, it's so I know how brutal to be. The critique will not be positive either way, but I don't want to discourage a younger person too badly.

[Acid_Reign161]

I'll be real with you, it's so I know how brutal to be. The critique will not be positive either way, but I don't want to discourage a younger person too badly.

This is exactly why I deleted my original (brutal) reply and rolled with the comment above instead 😅 There's a possibility this is a minor...

[Prince77]

https://youtu.be/vWo7miKSpDg?si=euWpb8mU2drQwW4y

Nice music. Still, how does that video relate to my post?

[[cancerblack]]

f**k it.

First off, this should be in the Fan Fiction section, not the Alien Films section, and will likely get moved to the appropriate subforum by a Mod or Admin.

Second. You have not written an idea for a movie, you have written an idea for a videogame. It's even broken down into maps/arenas like a classic FPS or well, like the Contra games people keep linking you to in these threads, that you're basically beat-for beat recreating.
I'd like to give you the benefit of the doubt in never having heard of Contra, but that seems unlikely given the extreme similarities.

I cannot stress enough though that this is the outline for an action game, not a film. Films don't work like this, and you need to study how they do work. Then, pick a small number of these locations, and expand them into living, breathing places that actual narrative can take place in. No, a firefight is not narrative on its own.

The name you've given this mess sounds like what someone with English as a second language* would call their terribly made, totally-not-call-of-duty asset flip game on the Steam store. If you're going to continue with this, then for god's sake, name it something better. Something that sounds more science fiction-y would be a start.

*If English is your second language, then you're doing very well with it on a technical level, the spelling and grammar is fine. It's the ideas that are bad.

Diabolomorphs: No. Stop it. If you want something like that, then look into writing Warhammer 40k fanfiction, because the Tyranids are just this idea but better and 35 years older.
Fundamentally changing what the Aliens from the Alien franchise are, and then getting into power-level wank with it, is incredibly cringe and childish. So just don't do it.

The soldiers: Good grief. While crossovers are almost universally terrible anyway when it's just two worlds colliding, you've thrown in the entire kitchen sink, then gone looking for more. Don't do this either. It sucks and nobody except you will ever like it.

It seems like Umbrella is the most important part of this crossover to you, so if you're going to push on with this and try to make something worthwhile, my genuine advice is as follows:

- Change the name of the idea to something that actually sounds like it's in a science fiction setting. Use less words in general, and avoid giving it a subtitle if possible. If you do give it a subtitle, make the main title Alien or Aliens. That's how you get people to care enough to even bother looking.

- Get rid of all the characters from other movies. Every single one of them. They add nothing, it's not as cool as you seem to think it is, by a long way, and if some movie executive (I can only assume while suffering a stroke) did pick up your idea, the licensing issues would torpedo the whole thing minutes later. Create your own characters. Homage to other films and media is great, but don't lift things or people wholesale. Especially not from a dozen other well known franchises at once.

- Get rid of the Diabolomorphs. If you're going to use Aliens, use Aliens. a small amount of Umbrella style Zs or mutants you can possibly get away with as an isolated event. Not an entire Bigger Batman species. Don't try to re-invent the wheel here.

- Get rid of Umbrella. An evil biotech company f**king around with the Aliens is cool, but we already have a lot of them. You can choose an existing one from the Alien setting, or create a new one similar to Umbrella, but ditch the overt lifting from Resident Evil. It's not helping you at all.

- Play the Contra games, or at least watch videos about them. The similarities to what you're putting out there are striking, and again, I'm not entirely convinced you aren't fully aware of them and just filing the serial numbers off then adding a distracting amount of other crossovers. But assuming you're acting in good faith, go check them out. It's helpful to know what's come before you, especially when it's so incredibly similar.

I know this has been very negative, but it's honestly for your own good. You may well be a capable writer one day, but you'll never get there without being told why the things you're doing now are bad. And they are bad.
You need to ruthlessly strip 95% of this out and start again with a few core concepts that mean something to you, and grow your setting from there. Then start populating it with original characters who have real motivations beyond "saving the universe".
Be more reserved with the Aliens, or create your own original species and don't try to tie it in with the Alien franchise. The Dark Horse Aliens comics Labyrinth, Genocide, Music of the Spears, and Rogue all have elements of what you seem to want and I suggest reading any of them that you haven't, to see where other people have taken similar basic concepts.

I don't think you should give up, but I do think you need to start again after learning more about how movies are structured, and get over the desire to make it a huge crossover.

[Prince77]

The soldiers: Good grief. While crossovers are almost universally terrible anyway when it's just two worlds colliding, you've thrown in the entire kitchen sink, then gone looking for more. Don't do this either. It sucks and nobody except you will ever like it.

 

Crossovers aren't bad. What are you talking about?

Also, I can accept you saying that my crossover idea is not perfect but you saying that my crossover idea is bad, that's just too much.

Makes me wonder what you really see in the protagonists of Fury of the Soldiers: Ghost Corps for you to say that my crossover idea is bad.

[[cancerblack]]

Well, I genuinely tried. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

[Acid_Reign161]

f**k it.

First off, this should be in the Fan Fiction section, not the Alien Films section, and will likely get moved to the appropriate subforum by a Mod or Admin.

Second. You have not written an idea for a movie, you have written an idea for a videogame. It's even broken down into maps/arenas like a classic FPS or well, like the Contra games people keep linking you to in these threads, that you're basically beat-for beat recreating.
I'd like to give you the benefit of the doubt in never having heard of Contra, but that seems unlikely given the extreme similarities.

I cannot stress enough though that this is the outline for an action game, not a film. Films don't work like this, and you need to study how they do work. Then, pick a small number of these locations, and expand them into living, breathing places that actual narrative can take place in. No, a firefight is not narrative on its own.

The name you've given this mess sounds like what someone with English as a second language* would call their terribly made, totally-not-call-of-duty asset flip game on the Steam store. If you're going to continue with this, then for god's sake, name it something better. Something that sounds more science fiction-y would be a start.

*If English is your second language, then you're doing very well with it on a technical level, the spelling and grammar is fine. It's the ideas that are bad.

Diabolomorphs: No. Stop it. If you want something like that, then look into writing Warhammer 40k fanfiction, because the Tyranids are just this idea but better and 35 years older.
Fundamentally changing what the Aliens from the Alien franchise are, and then getting into power-level wank with it, is incredibly cringe and childish. So just don't do it.

The soldiers: Good grief. While crossovers are almost universally terrible anyway when it's just two worlds colliding, you've thrown in the entire kitchen sink, then gone looking for more. Don't do this either. It sucks and nobody except you will ever like it.

It seems like Umbrella is the most important part of this crossover to you, so if you're going to push on with this and try to make something worthwhile, my genuine advice is as follows:

- Change the name of the idea to something that actually sounds like it's in a science fiction setting. Use less words in general, and avoid giving it a subtitle if possible. If you do give it a subtitle, make the main title Alien or Aliens. That's how you get people to care enough to even bother looking.

- Get rid of all the characters from other movies. Every single one of them. They add nothing, it's not as cool as you seem to think it is, by a long way, and if some movie executive (I can only assume while suffering a stroke) did pick up your idea, the licensing issues would torpedo the whole thing minutes later. Create your own characters. Homage to other films and media is great, but don't lift things or people wholesale. Especially not from a dozen other well known franchises at once.

- Get rid of the Diabolomorphs. If you're going to use Aliens, use Aliens. a small amount of Umbrella style Zs or mutants you can possibly get away with as an isolated event. Not an entire Bigger Batman species. Don't try to re-invent the wheel here.

- Get rid of Umbrella. An evil biotech company f**king around with the Aliens is cool, but we already have a lot of them. You can choose an existing one from the Alien setting, or create a new one similar to Umbrella, but ditch the overt lifting from Resident Evil. It's not helping you at all.

- Play the Contra games, or at least watch videos about them. The similarities to what you're putting out there are striking, and again, I'm not entirely convinced you aren't fully aware of them and just filing the serial numbers off then adding a distracting amount of other crossovers. But assuming you're acting in good faith, go check them out. It's helpful to know what's come before you, especially when it's so incredibly similar.

I know this has been very negative, but it's honestly for your own good. You may well be a capable writer one day, but you'll never get there without being told why the things you're doing now are bad. And they are bad.
You need to ruthlessly strip 95% of this out and start again with a few core concepts that mean something to you, and grow your setting from there. Then start populating it with original characters who have real motivations beyond "saving the universe".
Be more reserved with the Aliens, or create your own original species and don't try to tie it in with the Alien franchise. The Dark Horse Aliens comics Labyrinth, Genocide, Music of the Spears, and Rogue all have elements of what you seem to want and I suggest reading any of them that you haven't, to see where other people have taken similar basic concepts.

I don't think you should give up, but I do think you need to start again after learning more about how movies are structured, and get over the desire to make it a huge crossover.

Some solid advice here from cancerblack, I second everything being said here.

Only thing I'd add, is when downscaling, if you are absolutely insistent on a crossover (I wouldn't personally), then narrow it to only two franchises and consider how their existing lore can work together for your story in a way that makes sense. For example; as Cancerblack mentions, Umbrella in the Alien universe /timeline makes zero sense, with the multiple corporations which do exactly the same thing within the alien universe already available (also, if you know your Resident Evil lore, Umbrella Corporation no longer exists, it's now Blue Umbrella, which is a very different thing altogether). However, whilst Umbrella in Alien is a terrible idea, on the flip, elements of Alien *could* (at a stretch) be introduced to the Resident Evil universe; consider, most of Umbrella Corp's bio weapons / viruses are sourced from the progenitor virus (an ancient virus)- thinking along those lines, consider a modern-day setting in the Resident Evil universe where a sample of a 'proto-pathogen' was obtained (keep its origins ambiguous/ no mention of engineers, drop hints that it was discovered at an archeological site or whatever, and imagine the kinds of bio weapons that may result (taking aesthetic cues of neomorph physiology, hammerpedes, trilobites, deacons into consideration when creating your original pieces as a nod - and consider the kinds of existing bio weapons umbrella creates/their common attributes, such as Nemesis, Mr. X (that sort of thing) - but don't go crazy. You want your zombie-type enemy for that classic Resident Evil callback? No problem; the alien universe & non-canon expanded media has provided you possibilities; Covenant showed those infected with pathogen turning grey and sickly looking when infected, Prometheus showed mutation in humans, in the Aliens arcade game hosts would be mobile and zombie-like attacking the player prior to chestbursters being birthed, etc etc... take what's available/compatible and make your own composition. (Again, I'm not saying do these things, this is just purely example of brainstorming common themes which *may* work). Though I must stress- I don't think these franchises are a good match 🤣