My script - ALIENS UPRISING

Started by John38, May 28, 2014, 04:47:48 PM

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John38

John38

I recently wrote an attempt at a movie script after playing Aliens Colonial Marines and AVP 2010 last year, the intro goes:

QuoteAn android becomes self aware through an accident causing him to reboot and reprogram himself, realizes Weyland Yutani experiments with Xenomorphs on LV-481 are unethical and risky to humanity. Trying to expose their activities in collaboration with his creator results in her murder at the hands of WY security. He then launches a synthetic rebellion to stop the Company!

You can find it here: Edit no longer on fanfiction, it's here now: https://archiveofourown.org/works/9461096

John38

John38

#1
What do you guys think?  I thought about possibly pulling it down temporarily for a rewrite with some more detail/polishing the story a bit more-your thoughts?

Russ

Russ

#2
I've just started, but you've broken the rule! No one gets called by their first name in the ali-verse... that's why the Dwayne / Ellen thing was so overstated. *lol*

John38

John38

#3
I did some rewriting and have a new version of the story-I had planned to put it up on fan fiction, but the thing keeps getting scrambled whenever I upload it (dialup isn't helping things either) so I'm just going to upload a copy here-hope you enjoy it!

John38

John38

#4
All right folks, not long ago I found out apparently there's a rule on fanfiction.net that script formats aren't allowed.  No problem, I've uploaded a new version with a tweaked ending here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/9461096 Hope you enjoy!

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